Hi, this is much better, congrats

I will say what i think, the typography side of it (the fonts used)... Stretched fonts (last line) don't look that nice, the rule is use specific fonts, but avoid modifying them (like stretching them in that case). Use an "extended font" instead.
The status (offline, etc...) is already outlined by red, no need to make it bigger than the pilot ID.
Avoid using too many different font styles, the most simple is the best

The last thing, the delta logo is too big in the web url, if it was the same height than other letters, i think it would be fine, instead of separating both part of the url.
I'm done, of course it's as usual my personal opinion. It's not the ultimate reference.
Keep up the good work !